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Displacement definition under periodic boundaries is not explicit, yet it is central to MSD “geometric saturation”, PDF boundedness/platykurtosis, and the stated saturation level (MSD \rightarrow L^2/6) (Eq. (3), Sec. 3.1; Fig. 2 caption; Sec. 3.4). If particle coordinates are wrapped/modded each step and $\Delta x(t)=x(t_0+t)-x(t_0)$ is computed from wrapped coordinates or a minimum-image convention, MSD and $|\Delta x|$ are artificially bounded and late-time behavior reflects dispersion/mixing on a torus rather than physical diffusion. Conversely, using unwrapped positions yields unbounded MSD and is the standard basis for diffusion-coefficient estimation.
Recommendation: In Secs. 2.2–2.3, define precisely how $\Delta x(t)$ is computed: (i) wrapped coordinates, (ii) minimum-image displacement, or (iii) unwrapped trajectories accumulating crossings. Re-derive the correct saturation value consistent with that definition (and clarify whether the reported $L^2/6$ corresponds to per-component or 3D $|\Delta x|^2$). If unwrapped positions/crossings are available (as suggested by the boundary-crossing statistic in Sec. 3.1), provide both: unwrapped MSD/VACF-based diffusion diagnostics (transport) and wrapped/minimum-image MSD/PDF diagnostics (mixing within the box). Reframe Secs. 3.1 and 3.4 accordingly, clearly separating “diffusion” from “finite-domain mixing/saturation.”
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The anisotropy decomposition uses the projection direction $\hat{V}_{\rm LS}$ evaluated at the end time/location along the trajectory, $\hat{V}_{\rm LS}(x(t_0+t), t_0+t)$ (Sec. 2.3; related discussion in Sec. 3.2). Because $\hat{V}_{\rm LS}$ varies in space/time, projecting a net displacement onto the final direction can bias $\lambda(t)$, especially if $\hat{V}_{\rm LS}$ rotates over the lag time, potentially producing an apparent transverse dominance that reflects frame rotation rather than physical anisotropic dispersion.
Recommendation: In Sec. 2.3 and Sec. 3.2, (i) justify this end-time choice, and (ii) add robustness checks computing $\lambda(t)$ with alternative definitions: start-time $\hat{V}_{\rm LS}(x(t_0), t_0)$, lag-averaged $\hat{V}_{\rm LS}$, and/or a time-integrated decomposition that projects instantaneous velocity increments onto instantaneous $\hat{V}_{\rm LS}(t)$ along the path. Also condition on $|V_{\rm LS}|$ to avoid ill-defined directions when the filtered field is weak. Report whether the transverse-dominant plateau ($\lambda\approx0.52$) persists across definitions and provide uncertainty bands.
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Key numerical/DNS metadata and analysis details needed to assess robustness and reproducibility are missing or qualitative (Secs. 2.1–2.4). This includes DNS resolution and scheme, viscosity, Reynolds number (e.g., $\mathrm{Re}_\lambda$), Mach number (or $c_s$ and $u_{\rm rms}$), forcing amplitude/correlation time, and explicit dataset DOI/URL; also snapshot spacing $\Delta t$, total physical duration relative to $T_e$ and (if possible) Kolmogorov time, tracer RK4 substepping, and any convergence/accuracy checks for interpolation and time stepping.
Recommendation: Expand Secs. 2.1–2.4 with a reproducibility block: list grid $N^3$, $\nu$, forcing implementation (including its temporal correlation), achieved $u_{\rm rms}$ and Mach number, and $\mathrm{Re}$ (preferably $\mathrm{Re}_\lambda$), plus dataset DOI/URL and citation. State snapshot cadence and analyzed duration in units of $T_e$ and (if available) $\tau_\eta$. Specify the RK4 substep and whether velocities are temporally interpolated between snapshots. Add a brief convergence check (e.g., substeps$\times2$ for a subset, or comparing MSD/$\lambda$ at two integration settings) and clarify stationarity of the analyzed window.
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Diffusion coefficient estimation from VACF integration is under-specified and not cross-validated (Sec. 2.3; Sec. 3.1). Since finite-domain effects and noisy long-lag correlations can strongly affect the VACF integral—especially if wrapped displacements are used—the reported $D\approx0.010$ is difficult to evaluate.
Recommendation: Show $\mathrm{VACF}(t)$ with uncertainty and document the integration procedure: quadrature method, chosen cutoff time (and rationale relative to finite-domain effects), and sensitivity of $D$ to moderate changes in cutoff. Where possible, cross-check $D$ against an MSD-based estimate from the linear regime (for unwrapped MSD). If wrapped/minimum-image displacement is retained for some diagnostics, clarify that VACF-based $D$ is computed consistently with unwrapped transport definitions.
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Vortex “trapping” identification based on $Q>0$ and trapping-time inference via a Lagrangian $Q$ autocorrelation are not sufficiently justified as measures of coherent vortex-core residence (Secs. 2.4, 3.3). In 3D turbulence, $Q>0$ is a broad topology indicator and can include non-core regions; an autocorrelation time conflates structure persistence, advection, and oscillatory motion and does not directly provide the distribution of contiguous residence times needed to assess waiting-time mechanisms relevant to anomalous transport.
Recommendation: In Sec. 2.4 and Sec. 3.3: (i) justify $Q>0$ versus a thresholded criterion (e.g., $Q>Q_{\rm thr}$ with $Q_{\rm thr}$ defined by RMS or percentile), and report sensitivity of $\tau_Q$ and cohort results to threshold choice; (ii) compute and plot the empirical distribution of contiguous residence times in vortical regions (PDF/CCDF of “time continuously with $Q>Q_{\rm thr}$”), including tail characterization (exponential vs power-law) and uncertainty; (iii) clarify what $\tau_Q$ from autocorrelation represents operationally and how it relates (or does not relate) to these residence-time distributions.
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The claims about absence of Lévy-flight-like behavior and “statistically indistinguishable Gaussian” displacement PDFs are stronger than currently supported, given limited reporting and potential bounded-support artifacts (Secs. 2.4, 3.4). Hill-estimator reporting uses a confusing sign convention ($\alpha_L \approx -7.1$) and power-law tail estimation can be invalid if applied in a regime affected by periodic boundedness/saturation.
Recommendation: In Sec. 2.4, fully specify PDF construction (component vs radial, normalization, number of samples, use of multiple time origins, binning/KDE choices) and explicitly restrict tail diagnostics to pre-saturation times (identified using the clarified displacement definition from Secs. 2.2–2.3). In Sec. 3.4: (i) report goodness-of-fit metrics (KS/AD statistics) at several intermediate times, not just one; (ii) show kurtosis/excess kurtosis vs time with uncertainty bands; (iii) clarify the Hill model and adopt a standard positive exponent convention, e.g., CCDF $P(|\Delta x|>x)\propto x^{-\alpha_L}$ with $\alpha_L>0$, and include a Hill plot versus tail fraction $k$ to demonstrate robustness. If wrapped/minimum-image displacements are used, explicitly state that late-time tails are truncated by construction and avoid interpreting Hill fits there.
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Several interpretations about mechanism and generality are overstated given one flow configuration and one filter choice: e.g., $\lambda(t)$ as a “direct kinematic signature” of solenoidal forcing and statements implying forward-cascade suppression of anomalous transport (Abstract; Secs. 1, 3.2, 4). Without control cases (different forcing, Reynolds number, filter band, or compressibility), the results are best framed as evidence for this dataset rather than a universal mechanism.
Recommendation: In Sec. 3.2 and Sec. 4, rephrase causal/universal language to dataset-scoped claims (“consistent with” rather than “direct signature/proof”). Add a short parameter-sensitivity discussion (end of Sec. 3 or Sec. 4) and, if feasible, at least one concrete robustness test: vary the $V_{\rm LS}$ filter band (e.g., $n=1$–$2$, $1$–$4$) and/or analyze an additional available dataset (different forcing or $\mathrm{Re}$). If additional datasets are not feasible, clearly state this as a limitation and outline what would be needed to establish generality.
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The FTLE analysis is under-defined and, as implemented, is conceptually misaligned with the short-time trapping/ejection dynamics emphasized elsewhere (Sec. 3.5; FTLE definition missing from Sec. 2). Long-time FTLEs in a periodic bounded domain can be dominated by bounded separations and averaging over many events, so concluding FTLE is a “weak indicator” risks being misleading without exploring short-time/finite-scale alternatives.
Recommendation: Add an explicit FTLE definition and numerical protocol in a new Methods subsection (e.g., Sec. 2.5): how pairs are chosen, initial separation, integration time/window, handling of periodic distances, and whether re-normalization is used. In Sec. 3.5, either (i) compute short-time FTLEs over windows comparable to $\tau_Q$ and test correlation with exit/ejection events, or (ii) reframe this section as a negative/inconclusive diagnostic given boundedness and remove/soften interpretive claims. Consider replacing/augmenting FTLE with conditioning on local strain-rate magnitude $|S|$ or $Q<0$ at vortex-exit times.